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Bye-bye, birdie.

Never had there been such succulence,

I mean loveliness, so sweet and tender, my birdie.

I will never forget, nor will I ever find the like.

Dearest birdie, no more will I glimpse such color,

But I will forever treasure those last few strands, stray feathers.


Bye-bye, birdie.

I must confess my bafflement.

Four times did I call, and three did you disregard.

Why the fourth?

I was not so deceived to trust to hope.

I knew that it was three, always three.

What creature could withstand trice the magic?

None, yet you broke all the rules.

On the fourth you came eagerly to my cage.


Stupid, birdie!   

I could not control such nature.

Do not blame me, such was your enticement.

I was lost from that very moment, and now so are you.


Birdie?   

Where have you taken yourself?

How could you leave me here with only these remnants?

They do you not justice, and now I am losing.

Those moments of red are all but gone.


Come back, birdie.

It is only I.

Can you see the dark?

I am here, birdie.
©2009 *Shihai-sha
:iconshihai-sha:

Author's Comments

Something that I had to write out of my head one of these past nights, in order to sleep. ^^;

A bit different for me I know, but I'm rather fond of this piece. :iconinloveplz:

As always comments/suggestions are always welcome. :blowkiss:

:heart: Toodles :heart:

Bye-bye Birdie (C) Shihai-sha

Be warned, this will be updated. :evillaugh:

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:iconbeforethed4wn:
...this is very interesting, it makes me think you're talking to someone in particular.

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In this world, vast as the eye can see, is there any room for a little bird like me?
:iconshihai-sha:
Maybe or it could be just a weird fancy. I really wasn't thinking of anything when I wrote it, but you should re-read and think of eating while doing so.

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Note to self: acquire a giant robot, which in turn, will make up for your personal feelings of inadequacy!

:coffeecup: I drink coffee for medicinal purposes. It helps the stupidity go down smooth.
:icon18kairi18:
Sorry to butt in, but, "think of eating"? o_O

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I fear that one day, I'll meet God...He'll sneeze, and I won't know what to say...
:iconpigu3x:
very touching.....good job

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on the verge of success


I believe in Jesus Christ my Savior. If you do too and aren't scared to admit it then copy and paste this in your signature.
:iconshihai-sha:
:lmao:

It was more of an after thought. After I had some people read it before posting they mentioned that, and it was then that the possibility that I was writing about my dog was brought up. He has been catching birds of late and eating them/leaving trophies in my front lawn.

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Note to self: acquire a giant robot, which in turn, will make up for your personal feelings of inadequacy!

:coffeecup: I drink coffee for medicinal purposes. It helps the stupidity go down smooth.
:iconflatchicken491:
You...you sicko

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"Listen -- strange women lying in ponds, distributing swords is no basis for a system of government. Anarcho-syndicalism is a way of preserving freedom." - Dennis the Peasant (Monty Python and the Holy Grail)
:iconshihai-sha:
Mm hmm.

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Note to self: acquire a giant robot, which in turn, will make up for your personal feelings of inadequacy!

:coffeecup: I drink coffee for medicinal purposes. It helps the stupidity go down smooth.
:iconshihai-sha:
Well thank you very much. :glomp:

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Note to self: acquire a giant robot, which in turn, will make up for your personal feelings of inadequacy!

:coffeecup: I drink coffee for medicinal purposes. It helps the stupidity go down smooth.
:iconpigu3x:
youre welcome

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on the verge of success


I believe in Jesus Christ my Savior. If you do too and aren't scared to admit it then copy and paste this in your signature.

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